Verbosely paraphrased lyrics quiz - B

[undyingking]

How would you assess my inferior musical performance -- would you boycott it?

And for a bonus:

A wealthy metropolitan appreciated his fortune but found his life generally hollow and unhealthy.

Comments

[ninthcouncil.livejournal.com]

They're actually less verbose than the originals :)

[undyingking.livejournal.com]

Mm, it's only when thinking about this that I've realized how verbose some artistes are. Might have to change the name of the quiz...

[mr-malk.livejournal.com]

Circumlocution in the name of scansion.
We've all done it! ;-)

(That's not a lyric BTW)